3/24/10

help please!

hey guys, designing a logo and wondering if it's successful or not.  meaning, i'm wondering if it can be properly interpreted.  how does this read to you, or, what do you think it says? :



















thank you!
poster: shatland

15 comments:

  1. justinpeMarch 24, 2010 at 4:01 PM

    Looks like it says Line. Resembles some sort of fish or frog.

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  2. ShockerMarch 24, 2010 at 6:31 PM

    Looks like Line to me, loks like a lizard if you view the 'e' as the head.

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  3. greaterthan4March 25, 2010 at 12:37 AM

    I read LINE, although first time when I looked I thought it said TIME, if that's your concern.It is unusual but good. What is it used for? some kind of athletic clothing, shoes...?

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  4. shatlandMarch 25, 2010 at 6:44 AM

    thank you for all your input!
    hmmm....
    well, i guess the LINE part comes through no problem. maybe not as successful as i had hoped. i hate to have to hint at it, but there's actually another "word" in there... see it now?

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  5. justinpeMarch 25, 2010 at 10:42 AM

    Is the hidden word Zine?

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  6. -kevMarch 25, 2010 at 10:53 AM

    it does have an aquatic/amphibian feel. could just be the green you used. first time i saw it, i thought it was looked kinda like a bullet train. not that that's a bad thing. line is definitely readable. really well put together too.

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  7. shatlandMarch 25, 2010 at 12:40 PM

    justin, you're on the right track.

    heavy emphasis on the quotations around "word" in the last post.

    anyways, i'm 100% positive if you knew the name of the company, you'd see it right away, i just wanted to see if it was 'seeable' without knowing...

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  8. justinpeMarch 25, 2010 at 2:46 PM

    can you tell us what kind of company it is?

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  9. greaterthan4March 25, 2010 at 2:54 PM

    how about zane or lane? cause I kinda saw an A around that I...or am I being ridiculous

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  10. shatlandMarch 25, 2010 at 3:30 PM

    whoa, i never saw the "A" until now, boz.

    boz was right, it is (will be) a clothing company.

    I can also see why you'd think it was a Z. very similar shape.

    what say you, kev, back to the drawing board?

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  11. greaterthan4March 25, 2010 at 3:35 PM

    well seth...the mystery is solved...mothafucka is 2line biatch

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  12. shatlandMarch 25, 2010 at 4:34 PM

    WIN WIN CHICKEN DIN!

    only took 3 guesses... HAHA... don't blame yourselfs, it IS a VERY abstracted design. sorta confusing. i'm kinda iffy on it now since it's not easily 'readable'. i still think, however, if you knew the name was "2Line Design" you could see it straightaway, right?

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  13. ShockerMarch 26, 2010 at 5:10 AM

    I can see it now that I know the name. Catchy name by the way, I dig it.

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  14. -kevMarch 26, 2010 at 1:05 PM

    I wouldn't go as far as a total redesign. maybe just keep playing with this one. i like it too much to scrap it altogether.

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  15. -kevMarch 26, 2010 at 1:14 PM

    iphone has a app that makes phone calls called "line2" think people will get confused?

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